Figure 1.1 Six Elements
Hence, the strengths of this chapter mostly
could be contributed to those transparent writing steps to effectiveness; as
the figure 1.1 has shown above, each element, though seems not illustrate
remarkable writing skills with flowery rhetoric wording, still manifests the
nuts and bolts of how a writer being wisely able to quote appropriate length and
angle of certain story to grab readers’ attention, making them vividly feel as
if living at the scene and being persuaded by writer’s perspective. From
initially knowing the purpose to the lastly using dialogue realistically, to me,
I especially get habituated to this
logical writing arrangement that allows me to easily grasp the essence of
proper thinking logic in narration and common writing blunders that should be
aware of.
Figure 1.2 Narration Process
Apart from the six elements, the chapter
even draws a sequence (Figure 1.2) to divide narration process into three parts in case that
people immaturely misuse the narration skill to court even worse counter
effects in essay. Significantly, keeping sufficient comprehension in stories
used to sustain in the writing has been a bedrock: while recounting the event,
no matter it’s hypothetic or realistic borrowed story material, writers have to
be equipped with enough familiarity and control in it so as to secure readers’
firm trust and motivation to keep on reading the piece of writing work;
otherwise, the work would just be discarded soon since none of the words and
ideas in story strikes a chord with readers. Once without supporting narrative
phrases, the essay would probably become nothing but made-up fantasy, which is
what this chapter tries to warn the novices.
In the last
few pages is attached with a student sample of narration; however, it would be
more perfect if other successful and failing examples of using narrations were
suggested in this book, further revealing the sharp contrast between convincing
narrative essay and vaunting one as references for individuals’ tryout in
narration.
Consequently, on the whole, the chapter 12 is rather clear and
serviceable to demonstrate passable use and effects during narrative writing.
For more thorough introduction, it could also attempt to supplement diverse
organized process graphic and exhibition of narration samples to expand the
completeness


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